Wednesday, October 22, 2008

Who's Responsible

The animals are to blame for the rising of the pigs for a number of reasons.They let the pigs take over,.They listened to boxer, and they let napoleon drive snowball out. The animals could not think for themselves.First they let the pigs  take over.the animals let the pigs assume the roles of the leaders because they were smart. no one tried to put a stop to the pigs over ruling. Second the animals listened to boxer.  They respected boxer so, thet listened to his two slogans "napoleon is always right and i will work harder".  last the animals let napoleon drive snowball out of the farm. The animals watched napoleon's dogs chase snowball out. after that they just went back to their sheds. Napoleon rose to power because of the animals, of they had though for themselves this "rise of the pigs could have been avoided.

1 comment:

Constitution Melville said...

Strong yellows and a good closing sentence.

Reds could be more specific and should include another quote.